Thursday, January 10, 2008

210 Ancient Civilization



We have just finished studying about Egypt and Kush relationship. You have to write a two-paragraph response.

1st Paragraph:

What does treaty mean? What does kandake mean? What does dynasty mean? Who was Queen Amanirenas and whom did she defeat?

2nd Paragraph:

After studying Hatshepsut, the first female pharaoh and Queen Amanirenas, what do you think about a woman’s ability to lead a country?


Remember, each paragraph must have at least four sentences.

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Tready means a written agreement
by wich two or more states sing a paper for be peaceful. Is like when you are in a war you kind of dont want to fight anymore and then you tready with another state. It is just like amarinemas did. She write a document in the one that she talked about a peace document.

I know kandake means a powerful woman rulers that protected her country from other states. For example amanirenas was a kandake because she even lost a eye because she was fighting for her country kush. That is the prove that not all women and girls just have to cook or play barbies.

I think it is kind like very good valentire because i would never do what Amarinemas did or like Hatshepsut. She fought so she would be a paharaoh like other pharaohs like senuserrat 2.

By:Andy Herrera

Anonymous said...

treaty means a written agreement.kandake means a power full woman that rules a state.dynaty is a line of rules, like a line of laws.queen amanirenas was the one who lost an eye figthing the egyptians.

I think that she did a great job like the boy pharaoh.She was as smart as a boy.She did a great job tring to become a pharaoh.


by brenda rudecindo

Anonymous said...

Andy and Brenda,

I will give you both feedback tomorrow (Thursday). Brenda, do you have four sentences on both paragraphs?

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Anonymous said...

She fought so she would be as good as the other paraoh

by:brenda rudecindo

Anonymous said...

trety:A written agreement by which two or more states agree to be peaceful.Kandake:



haikel ill finish later

Anonymous said...

Haiker and Wilmer where are your comments?

They are late as of last Tuesday

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Anonymous said...

Andy,

Do you mean courageous when you wrote "valentire"? Yes, I agree that Queen Amanirenas showed a tremendous amount of intelligence, courage and leadership. Don't you think that boys and girls can be leaders? Not all boys grow up to be leaders!

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Anonymous said...

Brenda,

Queen Amanirenas lost an eye fighting the Romans not the Egyptians. Who was as smart as a boy? Hatsheptsut (the first Egyptian female pharaoh) or Kandake Amanirenas? Are all boys as smart as them? Do you think that you did your best job?

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Anonymous said...

trety is a written agreement by which two or more states agree to be peaceful.Kandake is a powerful femae leader who co-ruled kush with her husband and sons. Dynasty is a family or group that rules for several generation.She fought as hard as she canto become a pharaoh. when she was in the fight she had her eye off.


I think it is a good idea because a women is sensetive and she would give house to all the homeless people so they could sleep in a house not in the streets.Second, maby the women as leader could have different laws so the country could be good.third, the women as leader could give the money to the people that need it to eat food.

Anonymous said...

by:Haikel Feliz

Anonymous said...

Kandakes like Amanirenas were queens of Kush and not pharaohs of Egypt! A few mistakes that could have been taken care by using Microsoft Word!

Are all women sensitive? Are all boys good at fighting? Why would women give food to the homeless?

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