Welcome Back Students. This is your first online assignment. You will have to complete several online assignments during the semester.
Questions: What did you do this summer? What places did you visit? What was your favorite thing to do during the summer vacation? What do you want to do during the next summer vacation?
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hii mr dilley how u doing?
hanny cruz =]
In this summer I went to the pool many times,to a lake,to a baby shower,and to many birth days,I went to play tenis and vascketball.
During the summer I visit a lake that was far away from boston.
My favorite thing that I did this summer was going to my auts baby shower and going to my birth day. In the next summer I want to go to Ecuador and past time with my family in Ecuador go to many places that I haven't visit and buy alot of Ecuadorian stuff.
This was the story of my summer.
By:
Ariana Simancas
THE LIL ANGEL
Jean, villalona
This summer I when to water country with my mother and my brother And we were have so mush fun the three of us together but we fill bad inside,
Because before school ended we were thinking about going the forth of us my Mother, father and my brother counting me but, before that summer came we When to a pool cook out and then two-week later my father got arrested.
My favorite thing to do in this vacation was no school and all the times The forth of us and then the three us when just to Cookout and pool party to get our mind out of the Terrible thing that happend.
In my next summer vacation I want to go to Dominican Republic just to See my family and to see roster fighting.
This summer I had to much fun with my family and friends,I visit two big places that was Cannobie Lake and Water Country and then I went to lakes and pools and many places more.
Cannobie Lake:in Cannobie Lake I was having so much fun and my feet hurted the time because I was walking a lot.Water Country:was way bettter than Cannobie Lake but I was lost there because I never being in Water Country just this summer but during the time I was lost I was having fun.
During the next summer what I want to do is have fun like this summer but way more and I want to go to more places like Six Flags.
karina santana =p
~Part One
My summer was sort of fun although I didn’t go anywhere, but I still liked it because I was doing something I liked at my house. What I did was play online games! Besides playing online games I went shopping with my family. Which was very fun, Only if/when you’re getting your self some clothes, other then that is boring!. Although I didn’t go to anywhere I still had fun because I am used to doing that every summer. I spend hours and hours in the computer playing games, about 5-7 hrs, some days 12 hrs+. I’d love to go to a huge! Pool, but I don’t like being in public pools. For the next summer vacation I would really like to go to a pool, water country and those type of fun stuff. Maybe even go to my country.
~Kenny Brea
~Fri 05,2008
hANNy CRUZ
What I did this summer was the I went to the pool, I went to the lake
I went party and I was practicing a lot for my sister sweet 15 because we where doing a dance so we had to practice . the places I visit where Canobie Lake to the pool and I went shopping I visit the airport a lot because lot of my family were coming from [ DR]
I went to Lawrence & providence many time because I had to go over there because of the food of the sweet 15. and the favorite thing I did was practice for the 15 and the party was the good thing . the next thing I want to do the next summer is the I want to go to DR so I can see my mom my little sister and all my family and at the same time I want to work so I can have $$money. That all I want to do the next summer. And that all I want and what I did to. =]
-what I did this summer was sleep, go to shopping and buy some shoes and clothes to back to the school on down town , hang out with friends in the malls I went to a party with my family and friends I get prepared to back to de school on sep 6 .
-the places that I visit was the zoo, on new Hampshire whit mi best friend and her mom , I went to New York with my family and I buy clothes and perfumes. I went to six flags, to see a concert of my favorite group of Reggaeton (JoWelL y randy) and water country with my family, my bets friend and her family .
-the favorite thing that I do during the summer was go to the Dominican festival on august 10th with some friends and I meet a Hanny there.
-what I want to do during the next summer vacations is go to my country (COLOMBIA) because my family and mi friends are there and I want to see them
Veronica Arango.
Frank and Rochely,
You have until Tuesday night to complete the first online assignment.
Mr. PPD
Ariana,
Thanks for sharing what you did. Pay attention to the spellings of "basketball and tennis". Also, make sure to capitalize all proper nouns such as the name of cities (Boston, Quito).
Question: What did you do for your birthday? Where was it?
Mr. PPD
Jean,
Thank you for sharing. I am happy about that happy moments that you had (the four of you), but I am sad to hear about the "bad thing". Let's talk about it and eat pizza!
Pay attention to the spelling of went (when means "cuando") and capitalize all proper nouns such as Six Flags and Water Country.
Question: Some people think that roster fighting should be illegal. Why do you think some people don't like it? Also, are you ready for soccer?
Mr. PPD
P.S. You rule!
Karina,
Great job! You need to keep writing with such many details! I am glad that you had fun this summer.
Question: Why was Water Country more fun than Canobie Lake?
Mr. PPD
Keny,
You used lots and lots of details! Great job! Next summer I am going to sign you up for a soccer camp and let's talk about a Water Country 8th grade graduation party.
Question: What online games did you play?
Mr. PPD
Hanny Cruz,
Thanks for sharing. It looks like you had a fun summer filled with fun activities and family obligations.
Question: What song was the sweet fifteen dance to? How was the sweet fifteen? Was it fun? Tell me a little about it!
Mr. PPD
Veronica,
It is a pleasure to have you as a student in our class and homeroom! Thanks for doing such a great job sharing (IT WAS A HOT DAY!!!)
Don't forget to capitalize all proper nouns such a New Hampshire, Water Country and Six Flags.
Question: What were some of the things that you did on the Dominican Festival?
Mr. PPD
208,
Almost everyone has completed their first online assignment. But it is not completed yet!!! Every time your complete an online assignment, I will read it and then give you feedback.
What is FEEDBACK? Feedback is what a person who reads your work writes back to you SO YOU CAN MAKE YOUR WORK EVEN BETTER!
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FEEDBACK can be a question, a comment or a suggestion. Sometimes I might say "that was amazing, there is nothing else you have to do" or I can say things such as "you did not really answer that question, can you try it again" or I might ask you to explain something in your work.
We will talk about in class on Monday and Tuesday.
Mr. PPD
Frank Perez
9/7/08
What I did over the summer?
What I did over the summer was
1. Go to water country for the 4th time I had a lot of fun with my family and friends we when to all the rides like the black hole and the dragon….
2. Stay and play online games like www.runescape.com
3. Go to 2 cookouts, in different house one had the Nintendo Wii and the other one had PS2. What I eat in the 2 cookout was hamburgers and meet.
4. Go to my father job in Hyde Park RCN.
5. Watch the Boston Red Sox in all the games I saw they won.
The places I visit were
1. Water country.
2. Friend’s house.
3. Hyde Park
4. Airport to get my grandma.
My favorite thing to do over the summer was going to water country because I had a chance of being with my friend’s and family all in one place. And what I want to over my next summer vacation is go to Miami Florida therefore I can see new places.
hanny cruz
the song was it called "tiempo de val" that song almost all the girls the do their sweet 15 dance that music. the sweet 15 were very good i had so much fun i eat a lot i dance a lot to. we took so much pictures and they did a video too we went in a limo and we went to jamaica pond to take the pictures.then after the party finished we did an after party at my house but yeah Mr. Dilley i had so much fun. =]]
see you && the new & the old student tomorrow in school byee =]
Frank,
Thanks for sharing. It seems that you had a fun summer! Now pay attention to the spelling of MeAt and the capitalization of proper nouns such as specific rides (Black Hole and Drangon).
Question: What wa sthe Dragon like? I missed it, because the line was too long.
Mr. PPD
Hanny,
Great job!
Mr. PPD
Hanny,
Great job!
Mr. PPD
Frank Perez
you go around like 10 times then it goes into the pool next to it but you see the dragon in the middle and 2 people can go in it at the time. but it toke me for ever.
This summer I did so many things. One of them is that I went to Puerto Rico. In Puerto Rico i went to see my dad and my dad and I went to do many places with my brothers and I it was verry good. We went to the beach,to the mall, see my other family in other places, camp out, mvie theather with my dad and my friends, i went to eat with my friends, we did so many things together. My favorite thing was being with my dad because I had a long leaving with my mom with out my dad. The next summer i want to go to Puerto Rico again because i want to be with my dad and have the fun that i had this summer because i want to be with my friends again. I think that was the best vacation that i had and i hope i go again to Puerto Rico.
By: Francys Perez
Thank you Frank.
Mr. PPD
Check your grade online.
Francys,
Thank you for sharing about your summer vacation. I am glad that you and your father got to spend the summer together.
Now, remember to capitalize the I (as I am, yo soy).
Question: What kinds of food did you eat in Puerto Rico?
Mr. PPD
Lets say, At the end of school i continued to play "RuneScape" for alittle while in the summer. Then about 3 weeks then i started playing "Conquer Online", but i played a hacked version,- ("a fake version of it") The fake version was called CoEmulator..So yeah thats pretty much it hehe.. :D
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RuneScape
ConquerOnline (CoEmulator)
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~Kenny Brea -------------- ~Thanks
Jean Villalona
Some people don't like Ruster fight, Because Must of the Times the Roster get kill of die in a day or less.
THANKS MR.DILLEY
Water Country is more fun than Cannobie lake because all the rides are with water and when is hot it feels good and the rides are scary like the "tobogan" that goes almost straight and it drop you and a pool.
karina santana =p
For my birth day I ask my mom if she can make a party and she did make a party and I invite some of my mom's friends and my friends.My party was in my house it was fun because I passed good with my family and my friends and also it was my little sister birth day we also did a cook out.That is what i did on birth day.
BY:ARIANA SIMANCAS
LIL ANGEL
In Puerto Rico I ate many things this are some of the food that ate tostones,rise,chiken,beans,amariyos,more food and all this stuff my grama cook it. It was very good.
veronica!
((yea the day was really hot)).
well some of the things that i did in the Dominican festival was dance bachata merengue ,eat Domiinican food and i saw some of my friends from my old school but the day was little sad because was raining and they have to stop the festival so it finish too early =(.
Ediannette
I went to a pool with my big brother. then I went to Friday with my aunt, gradmother and cousins and we was eaten some ribs and frids whith soda at sunday night. I visit Orlando Florida with my other aunt. Went I went to Olando Florida cause it was verry fun. TO the other summer vacation Iwant to go Puerto RICO.
In this summer I went to the river, pool, sea and party’s .I went to Dominican Republic for the whole summer. My favorite thing that I did during the summer was to be with my whole family in Dominican Republic and with my entire old friend over there, that’s was my favorite vacation in my whole life. If it’s possible I would like to do in the next summer is to go back to Dominican Republic again to be with my people and have a great vacation in my country.
♥Name: Rochely Sanchez
Sept 5-2008 ♥
Rochely,
Thanks for sharing about your summer in the Dominican Republic. However, let's not do like last year and wait for the last possible moment to complete our work!!!
Question: Who did you go with to the Dominican Republic? What kinds of foods did you eat there? Did you eat any Jonny Cakes?
Mr. PPD
By Friday please!!!
Ediannette,
Thank you for sharing about your summer. It is great to see you writing so well in English!!! Amazing!!!
Question: What part of Puerto Rico are you from? How many brothers and sister do you have? How old are they?
Mr. PPD
Thanks the following people for completing their feedbacks:
Hanny
Frank
Keny
Jean
Ariana
Francys
Karina
Veronica
Mr. PPD
Ediannette and Rochely,
You two have until Friday.
Mr. PPD
I went with my mom, sister and my two brothers and my father. The kind of food that I eat in Dominican Republic was “rice”, bean, and chicken, platanos, and a lot of vegetables, and more things. Well I eat a lot of kind of cakes in Dominican Republic.
By:Rochely Sanchez
9-16-08
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